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SHINE RIGHT with audio by ~thetangyzip:iconthetangyzip:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Song




SHINE RIGHT
Click here for audio: new, full version with both verses


I was walking down the street last night
About three a.m.
Looking at your face
In the moonlight

I wish you could see just how you look to me
If you could feel the way I do for a day
Then you would see

You know I know you know I can't live without you
So I wrote this song about you
Maybe you can sing the harmony with me
You've got a light deep down inside of you
In this world that's full of darkness
Take that light and let it
Shine, shine, shine

Don't hide you smile away from the world
Let them see your face
Beauty surrounds you
On all sides

You are my life
You make my days bright
So if you're gonna shine
Shine right

Every time I close my eyes I just can't help but smile
Because I know
You're smiling back at me

I want to know
How does it feel to be the greatest girl alive
I wonder what it's like to be devine

Gotta do it right, gotta do it right, gotta do it
Right
You're my everything
And I know
You're the one for me

You've got a light deep down inside of you
So open up your heart
And shine with it, shine with it
You gotta shine right

Don't hide your smile away from the world
Let them see your face
Beauty surrounds you on all side

You are my life
You make my days bright
So if you're gonna shine
Shine right

You are the greatest thing that's ever happened to me
So I want you to know how much I love you

04/2004
©2004-2010 ~thetangyzip
:iconthetangyzip:

Author's Comments

UPDATE:
Added the second verse and now have an Recording of whole song with both verses posted for listening.

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Hey everyone! This is the first deviation I have submitted in quite some time... over three months! But it's worth it, I assure you.


This is a song I wrote for April at the beginning of Spring Quarter. I wrote it for her to listen to when she has self-doubt, and it is very special to both of us.

Thanks for looking and enjoy!!! And as always, PLEASE let me know what you think! Thanks!

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~gemini523 Jul 18, 2004, 4:33:43 AM
This is cute . I like it a lot . It made me smile and laugh a bit . Pretty good mr. tangy :)

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:iconporcelainflower:
~PorcelainFlower Jul 21, 2004, 5:33:58 PM
Don't hide you smile away from the world
Let them see your face
Beauty surrounds you
On all sides
I like that its pretty! This is a really good piece! Keep writin, you got talent.

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You're just a little girl now
You're just a girl who misses her dad
And all the toys that she had

Thought I could make you older
Thought I could keep you out of harm
But now you're caught in my arms
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~lostamongroses Oct 1, 2004, 11:34:57 AM
Hey honey. I love this song. It is very near and dear to me. Thank you for sharing it with the world. I love you.

April

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~~lostamongroses~

I’m not good at math – I’ve never been good at math. I accepted it from a very early age. My teacher would hand me a math test.
I’d just write on it, “I’m going to marry someone who can do this.”
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