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LOVE STEW by ~thetangyzip:iconthetangyzip:

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Love Stew

I wish I could make my love into a stew.
It would be warm and thick with lots of tender chunks.
I would feed it to you with a small wooden spoon.
If only my love could be stew.

I wish I could make my love into a park.
It would be wide and green with lots of twisty slides.
I would take you there every time it rained.
If only my love could be a park.

I wish I could make my love into a movie.
It would be charming and funny with lots of big stars.
We would watch it together and feed each other popcorn.
If only my love could be a movie.

I wish I could make my love into a pet.
It would be soft and cuddly with lots of youthful energy.
I would feed it and take care of it just for you.
If only my love could be a pet.

I wish I could make my love into a candle.
It would be colorful and fragrant with thousands of waxy wicks.
I would let it burn forever and ever.
If only my love could be a candle.

I wish I could make my love into a game.
It would be easy and fun with lots of rules to break.
I would let you win every time.
If only my love could be a game.

Most of all, I wish I could make my love into a poem.
It would be short and witty with lots of playful metaphors.
I would read it to you each and every night.
If only my love could be a poem.

12/16/03 4:57am

©2004-2009 ~thetangyzip
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Submitted: April 1, 2004
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Wow, when I logged in today it was the first time in 8w 3d 3h 4m 32s. That's a long time.

Anyway, I have posted and removed this poem before, a poem I wrote for April, ~ lostamongroses. It isn't world class, award winning poetry, just a little Halmark card type ballad. I was in a cute and goofy mood and thus my newest poem was born. I know it's corny, but just read it for what it is.

Thanks for looking and please be sure to let me know what you think!
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~BitesArmyBrat:iconBitesArmyBrat: Apr 1, 2004, 2:27:32 AM
I thought this was great...a lot like how I feel about James...
~Rockgirl22885:iconRockgirl22885: Apr 4, 2004, 10:06:07 AM
I love it nice way of putting love into words..lol at first i thought it said "if i could make love with a stew" lol i was like WHAT lol then i re read and seen very awesome job

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If a woodchuck could chuck wood how much wood would a wood chuck chuck?

Club: ~strongbadia
~lostamongroses:iconlostamongroses: Apr 10, 2004, 6:22:27 PM
I have the orignal copy of this poem in pocket with me now. I read it to myself every morning before I go to bed. This really makes me feel like I'm important to someone.

I love you Chris

April

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~~lostamongroses~

I’m not good at math – I’ve never been good at math. I accepted it from a very early age. My teacher would hand me a math test.
I’d just write on it, “I’m going to marry someone who can do this.”
~PorcelainFlower:iconPorcelainFlower: Jul 20, 2004, 5:59:46 PM
I really love this. You make love sound so good and simple and like its a great thing. You sounds like your bursting at the seams with love for someone, and you wish you could find a bunch of ways to show it...I really appreciate this piece. FAV

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You're just a little girl now
You're just a girl who misses her dad
And all the toys that she had

Thought I could make you older
Thought I could keep you out of harm
But now you're caught in my arms
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